"This life on Earth is but temporary. It is preparation for REAL life. Some folks are not passing the tests. They cheat and steal. They push down others. They look to fight for its own sake. They deceive."
Obviously they'll need to retake the test then. Sounds suspiciously like you're proposing reincarnation.
"Logically, the most important thing in life is your personal relationship with our Creator!"
In order for that to follow logically you'd have to show your "Creator" exists.
"He has given us a book, The Holy Bible. In it are many instructions and historically accurate stories."
Yes. Instructions you people don't follow and "historically accurate" stories that either contradict themselves from one book to the next or are so mundane as to not be terribly important to begin with.
"Your SOUL (your essence
your inner being) will go back to God after this life."
Then you have evidence for both a soul and God? No, thought not. One shouldn't proclaim things as truth when one has no evidence to support it.
"Don’t make it your life’s pursuit to hide from God behind evolution (without even bothering to watch even one Kent Hovind video)"
First of all, how does someone hide from an omnipotent and omnipresent entity?
Second of all, Kent Hovind? Are you insane? I've seen about one minute and forty seconds of one of his videos and found, literally, at least a half a dozen errors. And that was just in his introduction before he actually started debating/preaching.